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knoxdiver
Posts: 54
Join date: 2009-07-10
Location: Tennessee
 |  Subject: My Little Dhampir--a Shadow Kiss fanfiction  Sun Jul 19, 2009 2:11 pm | |
| So I'm not pro-RoseXAdrian, but I still really like Adrian. I think he's a fascinating character because of his complexity. So I decided to take a couple scenes from Shadow Kiss and rewrite them from Adrian's perspective. So far, it's just Adrian's thoughts after the trial fight between Rose and Dimitri, but I've been working on a revamp of chapter 29. If you have a fanfiction account, I'd appreciate any feedback through reviews. If not, you can just let me know on here. Thanks! I hope you like it! My Little DhampirI didn’t understand how no one else noticed it. Of course, no one else was able to see what I could: that their auras glowed with passion and…well, love.
Regardless of my extra sense, it was still so blatantly obvious. Rose was still straddling Belikov, her fingers splayed across his chest, which heaved in sync with her own after their ‘battle.’ Teacher and student gazed at each other as though they were drowning and the other was their air. Or perhaps as though a hungry Strigoi might gaze upon a hapless victim. Starving. Ravenous. I half expected them to go at it right there in front of everyone on the cold, wet grounds.
An iron fist clenched in my stomach, twisting my insides. I tasted something metallic and slightly acidic in my mouth. It felt like when the magic left my control: dark, angry, perverse. Jealousy, I realized.... Click to continue |
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ShadowKissed
Posts: 106
Join date: 2009-07-29
Location: Canada
| | Subject: Re: My Little Dhampir--a Shadow Kiss fanfiction Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:20 pm | |
| OMG I love, I hope that you write more..I would love to read it..let us know if you do please!
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knoxdiver
Posts: 54
Join date: 2009-07-10
Location: Tennessee
| | Subject: Re: My Little Dhampir--a Shadow Kiss fanfiction Wed Jul 29, 2009 11:26 pm | |
| Thanks so much, ShadowKissed!! I'm glad you liked it. I'm actually almost finished with the second chapter now. |
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madii
Posts: 46
Join date: 2009-08-02
| | Subject: Re: My Little Dhampir--a Shadow Kiss fanfiction Thu Aug 06, 2009 12:10 am | |
| yea i liked it was really good which is saying somethin i usually don't like fanfiction it's usually way to different from the actual story line to be good but i luved it  |
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GuardianLuna
Posts: 1
Join date: 2009-08-16
Age: 18
| | Subject: Re: My Little Dhampir--a Shadow Kiss fanfiction Sun Aug 23, 2009 11:56 am | |
| Wow, that was really good! I hope you post more soon. |
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DhampirToHeights
Posts: 11
Join date: 2009-09-18
Age: 67
Location: Else Where
| | Subject: awesome muse Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:00 pm | |
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Peace love n VA
Posts: 368
Join date: 2009-09-29
Age: 21
Location: New York
| | Subject: Re: My Little Dhampir--a Shadow Kiss fanfiction Tue Oct 27, 2009 9:38 pm | |
| Nicely written! I love your portrayal of Adrian- it stays true to the novels yet still gives us a much more imitate insight to him. The way you depicted him was really good. I like I like :-) |
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knoxdiver
Posts: 54
Join date: 2009-07-10
Location: Tennessee
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[xTeamDimitrix]
Posts: 866
Join date: 2009-08-28
Age: 15
Location: Wherever Dimitri is .;)
| | Subject: Re: My Little Dhampir--a Shadow Kiss fanfiction Sat Nov 07, 2009 12:40 am | |
| omg! i loved it was awesome write more!! _________________ Dimitri and Rose Forever[b] URL=http://media.photobucket.com/image/dimitri belikov quotes/Kristen10187/Strong.jpg?o=1]  [/URL][img] -I'd like to run away From you, But if you didn't come And find me ... I would die. - ~ by Shirley Bassey |
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